Saturday, January 31, 2009

The lion and the five friends

We had to write a story on "Unity is strength" in our school. I forgot the date and never thought about the story. Suddenly, yesterday it was the date to write and I wrote this story on the spot with title "Always together".

Once in a town named Rangapur five friends named Raj, Amar, Sam, Ram and Kumar lived. They were good hunters. Daily they would go to the dark forest for hunting. They would daily capture an animal or two and leave it in the zoo.

They wou each get 200 rupees. But they also wanted t make the people happy. So after their hunting they would gather in the royal stage and acta as clowns. Everyone in the town were happy until one day a lion escaped from the zoo. The lion would eat anyone who went across the forest.

The five friends saw that people were unhappy. They wanted to make them happy and anyway they were hunters. So they went to the forest to hunt the animal. They saw the lion resting in the cave. When it woke up it saw the hunters. It tried to attack them but they were fighting together. The lion was killed.

The friends went back to the town. They were happy as they have made the people happy. They continued their work of hunting and acting to make people happy. They received their reward of one thousand rupees and were very happy

2 comments:

Shan Nalliah / GANDHIYIST said...

DEAR NANTHINI,
GOOD STORY! BUT YOU REMEMBER THIS IN FUTURE.....STORY SHD BE WITH A MESSAGE OR LESSON!
GOOD START....INTERESTING DEVELOPMENT...SUDDEN OR UNEXPECTED END....=SHORT STORY OR NOVEL!

YOUR EXPERIENCES,OBSERVATIONS,FEELINGS ABOUT PEOPLE,PLACES,INCIDENTS...COULD GIVE INTERESTING STORIES OR ARTICLES!

அமுதா said...

Thanks uncle for the tips. I will keep them in mind